Painful Love - Visitor's Sad Love Poem

by Zeena Olson
(Calgary, AB, Canada)

your tender loving eyes so soft and sad.
you know nothing as to why you're here:
you are oblivious
I cry while you lie in bed; dying.
all the memories of you and I, have all flown away from your mind.
your pain cuts through me like a knife as I sit and watch you die
I beg god for help
but can he hear?
your life is almost over; too young to die

and my life is coming to an end too
because when you hurt, I hurt
and when you die
I die too.

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Apr 19, 2010
Pretty good
by: myownverse

This is a pretty good love poem.

Apr 12, 2010
Touching and heartbreaking
by: Fion

Hi Zeena, thanks so much for sharing this touching poem... it speaks of your pain and it's heartbreaking... May you find solace and comfort through writing and sharing your feelings.

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